Naruto

I find this work very...good, actually. But there are a few things here that drives me nuts, and it makes the thing seem bad.

The hair. The hair must have far more volume than that! If this is what his hair looks like, does that mean Kakashi's gonna have a baby Mohawk? Naruto has bangs coming from under his forehead protector and plenty above it. THEN you get started on his hair.

I just want to point this out : These days, simple pictures are terrible at showing fast movement. But I must say, I have recently watched Hayao Miyazak films, and he is the best, in my opinion, to show movement, even in a single picture, in a single frame. This is very close to his level, I can practically feel the wind right now.

Last thing : The space between the eyes is a little too big.

Hope this critique helped. Have a good day!