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Lupa Sketch

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My newest OC Lupa!
Name: Lupa Winterfield
Ethnicity: American
Type: Werewolf
Height: 6ft 6 in
Age: Apparently 19 years old (True age: unknown)
Hair: White
Eyes: Yellow
Powers: Ice and dark magic
Background story: Lupa was the alpha male of his werewolf clan. He was framed of killing his clan's shaman and was exiled. Now he wanders around trying to clear his name.

Lupa is a feisty pervert and loves to tease women with his good looks. He's also a gunslinger and is a master in it. He's fiercely loyal to his friends and family and is quite territorial and possessive.
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Excellent points:
Your shading and the amound of detail is clear and concise. It shows that your character is fashion minded, or just plain handsome. Your art is great in that you get a definite sense of personality with every part of him: the eyes, smile, body stance, hand position , etc. Cudoos ! (high five)

Where I can see the opportunity for improvement : His gender. Although many drawing based on a style of manga have characters that look like they could be either gender, the face of yours is definitely effeminate and the chest can appear woman-like. If you wish to have this effect, I would recommend incorporating that information in the short summary of your character.

Overall, great job! Your art left me wanting to leave my opinion , so i thought about it long enouigh to post this which is a good sign! I think you have good ideas and creativity, i look forward to more!

Hope my words are received well and help!
<3 Sabrina